Open Poetry #35 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
Relaxing is the sway of you, the rhythm of your breathing the gentle rocking of two when you hold me close Sometimes? I pray that you'll never let me go so I hold on tighter than I've ever known trying to match my own breath to yours so that I might find the calm once more and for a moment be lost: frozen in time in heart beats hold not wanting tomorrow to arrive here in this moment I feel so alive. Tomorrow brings with it fears of the uknown and I'm afraid, so afraid of being alone. Again. back when I believed in love and would lay my heart on the line. T. Lawrence |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"trying to match my own breath to yours so that I might find the calm once more and for a moment be lost: frozen in time in heart beats hold not wanting tomorrow to arrive here in this moment I feel so alive." I know this feeling, this moment, so well... and you have penned it perfectly. Love ya lady~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yes. there is that. I sometimes get bogged down with the empty that will follow. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the inhale then the exhale that moment, if only to hold it... very lovely words to explain such |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Passionately expressed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love has a way of doing that just holding tighter and never letting go.....hugssss you.... I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
trying to match my own breath to yours so that I might find the calm once more smile, this is absolutely lovely Bella, and so are you ![]() mxx drove me like a magnet |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Feeling the feeling, you say it well. Sandra |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I miss you, Donna darlin'. This is beautiful and poignant ... and I miss you. xoxoxo Alison |
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