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Blinding Dark
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Blinding Dark |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Words sometimes fail this lacking tongue of mine. I worry you won’t understand that I feel. Darkness falls and it’s hard to find my way around the obstacles, over the lump of what used to be laying there trying to trip me up. I had a dream you were there, in the dark, in a corner you had claimed for yourself. I wondered why you wouldn’t give me your hand making it less harsh. Not understanding that you’re waiting for your own. In my world dark is reality of all that never was. A life devoid of good decisions, happy endings and true understanding of why I can’t seem to be what you need. What my mouth can’t word, my eyes seep in volumes. and I worry that you can’t see that in the dark. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"In my world dark is reality of all that never was. A life devoid of good decisions, happy endings and true understanding of why I can’t seem to be what you need. What my mouth can’t word, my eyes seep in volumes. and I worry that you can’t see that in the dark." to the bone lady...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"What my mouth can’t word, my eyes seep in volumes. and I worry that you can’t see that in the dark." Perfectly stated Susan! Excellent write. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, A good write and I enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all!  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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