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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-06-28 11:26 PM



Eyes the color of coal (he smiles).
You know he isn’t real (he laughs).
Then the swollen skies burst open
and the rainbow splits apart.

And you silently stand solo,
staring at your open hands and heart.

~Filled with fragments~

He smiles. He laughs.
Then the image dissolves...
quickly falling into a black hole
as the swollen skies burst open
and the rainbow splits apart
your heart, leaving you

~Filled with fragments~


© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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1 posted 2005-06-28 11:29 PM


... some sparkle, others just cut like this

        rainbows do shatter far ....


              Hugs to you my friend

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2 posted 2005-06-29 09:19 AM



Oh, I'm liking this one, Kacy....


Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

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3 posted 2005-06-29 09:27 AM


Your poetry continues to broaden in it's horizons...
I like this style on you Kaci,
it looks lovely
and darn, it really hits home hon..
Hope you are well Kaci, miss seeing your words.

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4 posted 2005-06-29 10:03 AM


Kacy~
I am saturated with the imagery this one *gifts* me~

Lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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