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Open Poetry #35

filled with fragments

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-06-28 11:26 PM

Eyes the color of coal (he smiles).
You know he isn’t real (he laughs).
Then the swollen skies burst open
and the rainbow splits apart.

And you silently stand solo,
staring at your open hands and heart.

~Filled with fragments~

He smiles. He laughs.
Then the image dissolves...
quickly falling into a black hole
as the swollen skies burst open
and the rainbow splits apart
your heart, leaving you

~Filled with fragments~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2005-06-28 11:29 PM

... some sparkle, others just cut like this

rainbows do shatter far ....

Hugs to you my friend

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-06-29 09:19 AM

Oh, I'm liking this one, Kacy....

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-06-29 09:27 AM

Your poetry continues to broaden in it's horizons...
I like this style on you Kaci,
it looks lovely
and darn, it really hits home hon..
Hope you are well Kaci, miss seeing your words.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-06-29 10:03 AM

Kacy~
I am saturated with the imagery this one *gifts* me~

Lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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