Open Poetry #35 |
filled with fragments |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Eyes the color of coal (he smiles). You know he isn’t real (he laughs). Then the swollen skies burst open and the rainbow splits apart. And you silently stand solo, staring at your open hands and heart. ~Filled with fragments~ He smiles. He laughs. Then the image dissolves... quickly falling into a black hole as the swollen skies burst open and the rainbow splits apart your heart, leaving you ~Filled with fragments~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... some sparkle, others just cut like this rainbows do shatter far .... Hugs to you my friend |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I'm liking this one, Kacy.... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your poetry continues to broaden in it's horizons... I like this style on you Kaci, it looks lovely and darn, it really hits home hon.. Hope you are well Kaci, miss seeing your words. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ I am saturated with the imagery this one *gifts* me~ Lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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