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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-06-28 10:35 PM





The Golden Skein of Word

He pondered
          words swelled
                   thoughts rambled
                              passions welled
He penned
          expressions flew
                   demeanor changed
                              obsessions grew

She mused, quietly
           found words on wind
                   read then what he wrote
                              her secret touched within
She penned
          expressions flew
                    demeanor changed
                              obsessions grew

Quiet grew he in her read
           heart pounded, pleasantly
                     penned he word with hidden grace
                               wistfully thought of only her face

She glowed in smile
           inner secrets trembled
                      wound her pen around  reflections
                                he read with deep introspection

He deigned to draw
           the skein of pure raw
                       affection from her heart
                                 complexion he'd impart

She softly struggled to catch her breath
            as feelings from her he softly wrest
                       from the golden skein of word he drew
                                   from her the shy quickly flew

Electric in their obsessive zeal
            the golden skeins of word grew real
                      and life again poured forth from within
                                   having touched inner secrets therein

They penned
          expressions flew
                   demeanor changed
                              obsessions grew


1 December 2000
reposted with pleasure...
once on 1 December 2001
again on 28 June, 2005


© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2005-06-28 10:42 PM


Gawd thats awesome, and beautiful and wonderful all at the same time.

I love it K

I have been in a slump lately... have the words in there, but caint get them to come out

This was a magnificent write tho, and I am so glad that I popped in here to see it

)))hugs(((

Tima

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2 posted 2005-06-28 11:16 PM


This is really an exellent write Sunshine. Wow.  I really liked this.

-Juju

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3 posted 2005-06-29 10:32 AM


Wow, I dont remember this one but sure am glad you reposted it.
Darn lady....     

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4 posted 2005-06-29 11:09 AM


Oh my this is so beautiful...
Lovely...just lovely..
Hugs~Nancy

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5 posted 2005-06-29 11:41 AM


this was beautiful, seemingly like a world of pre-exsistent form or sort of spiritual unveiling of sorts, like a divine grace...perhaps an illuminated intellect?

well, certainly indicates some higher level of love...enjoyed this muchly

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6 posted 2005-06-29 12:51 PM


Yes, agreed, this is awesome and beautiful
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7 posted 2005-06-29 07:49 PM


Terrific write, SIL!  Ain't it the truth!!! ....jo
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8 posted 2005-06-29 08:59 PM


Sissie

I remember, and love it just as much.  Thanks for reposting this beauty.  It is timely, any time!  

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