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The Golden Skein of Word - 2001
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The Golden Skein of Word - 2001 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Golden Skein of Word He pondered words swelled thoughts rambled passions welled He penned expressions flew demeanor changed obsessions grew She mused, quietly found words on wind read then what he wrote her secret touched within She penned expressions flew demeanor changed obsessions grew Quiet grew he in her read heart pounded, pleasantly penned he word with hidden grace wistfully thought of only her face She glowed in smile inner secrets trembled wound her pen around reflections he read with deep introspection He deigned to draw the skein of pure raw affection from her heart complexion he'd impart She softly struggled to catch her breath as feelings from her he softly wrest from the golden skein of word he drew from her the shy quickly flew Electric in their obsessive zeal the golden skeins of word grew real and life again poured forth from within having touched inner secrets therein They penned expressions flew demeanor changed obsessions grew 1 December 2000 reposted with pleasure... once on 1 December 2001 again on 28 June, 2005 |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Gawd thats awesome, and beautiful and wonderful all at the same time. I love it K I have been in a slump lately... have the words in there, but caint get them to come out This was a magnificent write tho, and I am so glad that I popped in here to see it )))hugs((( Tima |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This is really an exellent write Sunshine. Wow. I really liked this. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wow, I dont remember this one but sure am glad you reposted it. Darn lady....   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my this is so beautiful... Lovely...just lovely.. Hugs~Nancy |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was beautiful, seemingly like a world of pre-exsistent form or sort of spiritual unveiling of sorts, like a divine grace...perhaps an illuminated intellect? well, certainly indicates some higher level of love...enjoyed this muchly |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Yes, agreed, this is awesome and beautiful |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Terrific write, SIL! Ain't it the truth!!!  ....jo |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie I remember, and love it just as much. Thanks for reposting this beauty. It is timely, any time! |
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