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I wonder? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Touching the face of dreams and someone i have yet to meet grabs me hard whirls me around then, kisses me long and unbreakable i wonder? i awaken… smothering zephyrs glow alternating sounds of rock lay with me i reach out, but my bed is empty empty empty…. remembering now, the fire remembering what i believed wanting, wanting wanting and yet nothing but teasing emotions infidelity lies, infatuated immaturity perhaps nothing but a notch on a gun… and still waiting i break, sometimes like fragile glass though, no one will see slow slow hours obvious loss of focus stimulating need i weaken knees shaking from want to believe my muse drives me along a advocate road glowing overemphasized sound and senses give a loving touch to my nose a glossary of fading verses should strive to make some intellect some present tense, terse implements i know one can’t go back, but i scorn passion with remorse refusing to fall and rise and fall…or feel the clever teeth of soreness i’ve never known any different? to feel lightning and the pile of rain…. it is the great noise of corn crying as it is milled smashed to fine grain skimming for writing assignments one space reinstates my thesis has winter convinced me? devoured me? turned me to ice pieces? did i staple a sign to the upper left corner of my forehead? with steady speaking eyes “not available” undermining cosmic syllables matter of factly lowering my head in understanding why? why? why? i’ve never had anything to compare to.. growling august or the black and blue worn palms of december and it’s mocking birds of cutting words… and so… Touching the face of dreams And someone I have yet to meet Grabs me hard Whirls me around Then, kisses me long and unbreakable I wonder? |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
This is beautiful.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
why? why? why? i’ve never had anything to compare to.. growling august or the black and blue worn palms of december and it’s mocking birds of cutting words… and so… ~*~ rip away...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ My gawd ... this is wonderful~  'someone i have yet to meet grabs me hard whirls me around then, kisses me long and unbreakable' Oh ... what anticipation~ You've got MANY killer lines of thought in this one, dear poetess~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
someone i have yet to meet grabs me hard whirls me around then, kisses me long and unbreakable I have had that happen, Lee...maybe it was not all that it seemed M |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
What a good poem. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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