Open Poetry #35 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it is the other side of you with the messed up hair and candy sticky left over that is never finished that makes me want to build a fence around your playground daydreams and charge admission to the crows on the tree that sweat while waiting for your birdbath to fill from the raindrops you make when you dance your mountains under the cloud bellies just enough to make them hungry and their saliva shimmers on your brim like viscid permission ________________ Dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you do her a wonderful justice my friend.. good morning way over there, from here. Hugs. I really want to care, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love that is never finished, is the art all mankind dreams of...if only in small particles, and is truly what life is...nurtured in the womb of the muses...just for us, if only we'd see and remember the senses of such... you always know what the human soul longs for... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do seem protective, that way... but do make sure the gate swings freely... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me think of raindances and puddles... enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS..You show beautiful heart in this! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
build a fence around your playground daydreams I always enjoyed the way you put your words together M |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
MMMMM! My morning coffee.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkOne~ This is brilliant penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Really lovely. Archivin'... "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like that image, the playground daydreams. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmmmmm - lovely imagery d- |
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