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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
It was a long walk towards home today the streets were wet with evening rain the clouds were dark in a loving way shielding me from solar rays i came home alone again today cars passed by unaware of my empty presence the wind howled through the trees and littered the street with deadened leaves Love was something that had been missing an emotion that had no apparent equal the feeling felt a thousand years old I stayed warm in my clothes but shivered from cold the people seemed to move in slow motion transparent figures of the known universe the reigning shadows of society described me with letters i and t the air had felt cold and empty a sign of the events to come later on the words barely escaped my mouth silently reading my emotions aloud the buildings stretched for the clouds the brick walls were cold and unwelcoming stories told from eventual wear the boston air was hard to bare i neared the steps of my place called home taking in the last of the whistling breeze the rain had given me pain and solace as the sun had slipped away unnoticed but the day had finally ended to the meloncolic sky i said goodbye my heart had sunk and filled with sorrow wondering if i'll walk home alone tomorrow |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
there is always tomorrow ...... I feel the blue in you ... Welcome and enjoy your stay ... here, you are never alone!!  "In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
echoing the above comment, adding...Welcome to PIP and thank you for such a well done read... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Having the ability to express yourself well, it is not uncommon to feel "outside" the others' circles...for a while. Suddenly, though, one day you'll come into your own, and seek some private time! I think you've found a second home here. I look forward to reading more of your writings! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very much enjoyed your debut post. I'm sure you will find plenty of friends here. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SYTurtle~ A GREAT first post~ Welcome to our school yard poetic playground !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautiful, though sad walk welcome to this wonderful hangout, turtle  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Hey Welcome. I am going to keep an eye out for you! you sem to have alot of talent. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
thank you all very much, i am so grateful to have found talented writers such as yourselves. I'll be posting more soon. Thanks again |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi there welcome to this place of poetic delight, wonderful first post. If you continue as well as YOU have started you'll be an asset to this palace of poetry. as always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to Pip!!!!!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
walking alone...it's not so bad but understood |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Hello, and welcome to Passions!! I really enjoyed your first post. We are glad that you've joined us and hope that you will really enjoy this wonderful group of Passions poets! Hugs, Ethel GG AKA garysgirl |
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