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Lingering |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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The thought that stayed an outreached hand clenched eyeglasses were broken then company did not want to move on. the moment lingered the issue was a broken hinge an arm detached from the main frame the moment lingered the glasses were not the same. knowing herself to be in a trance, an acrued collection of thoughts that refused to adapt to humm of waiters around the tables the moment stayed until another hand gently pushed she remarked "silly me, my hand is still clenched, must move on to another sketch. were you expecting two bodies to linger into the night"? she'd asked the shadow seated before her Here a hand demonstrated a visual plight. then both left and right ones returned to their original folded position. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I'm sorry that others don't understand what you are writing. I talked to my wife to night that I would love Python to 'do the oscars'. I suppose people entrench and quality gets missed. dave |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Your words always leaves me thinking and wondering. Take this for instance: " The thought that stayed an outreached hand clenched eyeglasses were broken then company did not want to move on." Your message very creatively said. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Dave, you shouldn't be sorry that much of what I write is not understood or misunderstood, I don't write on simple themes nor do I expect many hits on my poems from readers expecting light love poems. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ah, hearing the depth of absolute silence that necessarily follows this hand gesturing scene *touching the soul on the screen* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
agreed, so many talk with gestures and their fixations are even more pronounced through moments like this... |
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