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Quad_dune
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Ontario ,Canada

0 posted 2005-06-27 04:03 PM


Its like a flower in the centre of weeds.
The only thing that stands out.
The beauty of it all lies within the flower.
But its like no one ever sees its insides, the flowers true colour.
Its true beauty.
Everybody wants that one flower but you
just cant have, its not yours.
But who are we to own such beauty.
Its like trying to keep a good secret disclosed, you cant.
Its too much to handle it’s a free soul.
But no matter what you are prohibited from that flower.
You cant touch it you cant even look at it.
But yet all this time it longs for a owner.

© Copyright 2005 Quentin Davidson - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-06-27 05:21 PM


It sounds like a lot of thought went into this poem.  Keep it up!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-06-27 05:50 PM


Well done Quentin!
Very well done indeed!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

suthern
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3 posted 2005-06-28 04:43 PM


This reminds me of one who prefers weeds. *S*

I like your work very much and look forward to reading more! *S*

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-06-28 11:28 PM


As one who adores weeds and wildflowers, I enjoyed the thoughts in this poem.
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