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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-06-27 03:46 PM



Summer
On the yellow river
Far from the open sea
How I miss the pale blue sky
The autumn moon
Rising in the East

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Quad_dune
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1 posted 2005-06-27 03:51 PM


That Sounds Really nice...


Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2005-06-27 03:53 PM


There's a gentle melancholy in this one that speaks to me.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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3 posted 2005-06-27 10:17 PM


Had you lived then, there....today there would be treasured scrolls, hand-copied through time, with your words on them.

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Huan Yi
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4 posted 2005-06-27 11:38 PM



RL,

You do me too great an honor.

John

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2005-06-27 11:48 PM


I love this, and echo RL.

M

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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6 posted 2005-06-28 08:43 AM



But, I have to agree with Ed. You've left behind links to places I hadn't yet had a chance to explore...and you do the wise and ancient ones sweet justice...

ctowen
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7 posted 2005-06-28 08:48 AM


I have heard some say it is hard to understand your words

        ... nothing hear is misunderstood

          
    this is a cultured pearl!

                        enjoyed.

scorpio
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8 posted 2005-06-28 08:49 AM


Brief but powerfully profound.

believe in what your heart feels...

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9 posted 2005-06-28 03:32 PM


John~
And such a lovely pebble this is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Tiersdin
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10 posted 2005-06-28 03:38 PM


profound indeed!


enjoyed!


~tier

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11 posted 2005-06-28 06:58 PM


takes me back
a good mixture indeed
-wolf

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12 posted 2007-04-23 04:26 PM


forever beauty. your peom.
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