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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Summer On the yellow river Far from the open sea How I miss the pale blue sky The autumn moon Rising in the East |
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Quad_dune Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 26Ontario ,Canada |
That Sounds Really nice... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
There's a gentle melancholy in this one that speaks to me. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Had you lived then, there....today there would be treasured scrolls, hand-copied through time, with your words on them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
RL, You do me too great an honor. John |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love this, and echo RL. M Oh, you speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes My body aches to breathe your breath Your words keep me alive ~Sarah McLachlan~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But, I have to agree with Ed. You've left behind links to places I hadn't yet had a chance to explore...and you do the wise and ancient ones sweet justice... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I have heard some say it is hard to understand your words ... nothing hear is misunderstood this is a cultured pearl! enjoyed. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Brief but powerfully profound. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ And such a lovely pebble this is~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
profound indeed! enjoyed! ~tier  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
takes me back a good mixture indeed -wolf |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
forever beauty. your peom. |
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