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SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2005-06-26 10:13 AM

Talking to the Wind

Last night
I talked with the wind
It touched my face
  and caressed by hair
Its low melodic voice
  spoke of change and promise
It sang to me a lullabye
  born of a tender breeze

The wind has been there
It has seen
  and touched it all
It has known great fury
  reaping its anger upon the earth
  and to all who dwell within its reach
But, it assures me
  with a gentle breath of air
  that I am safe
That it is just the nature of life
  and we are all part of the whole
empty,
  as it may sometimes seem...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-06-26 10:21 AM

I was doing the same thing last night..but blowing kisses into it...

and they reached their destination

what a lovely write

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-06-27 10:25 PM

"That it is just the nature of life
and we are all part of the whole
empty,
as it may sometimes seem..."

Lovely verse SG,
And this was the icing for me.

Hugs,
TD

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-06-27 10:29 PM

"But, it assures me
  with a gentle breath of air
  that I am safe
That it is just the nature of life
  and we are all part of the whole
empty,
  as it may sometimes seem..."

Lovely this..
Lovely you.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

4 posted 2005-06-28 03:03 AM

I love to write about the wind...something about it just seems so magical, like a door to your emotions, you know? Nice write.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-06-28 01:50 PM

SimplyGold~
I am so glad this one blew my way~

I touch the wind ... the wind touches me~
Sometimes we are one ...~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2005-06-28 05:35 PM

PS, What a lovely image and a sweet thought.

SG

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

7 posted 2005-06-28 05:37 PM

This Diamond,

Thank you.

SG

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

8 posted 2005-06-28 05:38 PM

Enchantress,

Thank you. So nice of you to say.

SG

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

9 posted 2005-06-28 05:40 PM

Skoolyardturtle,

Thank you for your reply. Yes, magical it is. So interesting to feel it and yet not really see it.

SG

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

10 posted 2005-06-28 05:41 PM

Marge,

I am so glad that you read this and liked it. I value your comments.

SG

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2005-06-28 09:37 PM

Talk about a beautiful poem!! This flowed like a gentle breeze. Much enjoyed......jo

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2005-06-29 03:40 PM

This is just lovely... well done! *S*

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

13 posted 2005-06-29 03:49 PM

SimplyGold...Very tender write. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Angel1
Junior Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 20
TN, USA

14 posted 2005-06-29 03:51 PM

Wonderfull. Full of depth.

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