Open Poetry #35 |
The Foolish Heart Of Mine |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
The Foolish Heart Of Mine You can be fooled once But do not be fooled twice Why have I not listened When giving myself advice Fooled more than twice A lesson I seem to ignore Its the soft heart of mine That returns back for more Ignoring my own advice I have to accept the breaks The foolish heart of mine Makes the same mistakes Falling into fools paradise Being aware this fool is me Time after time I entered To the same loving fantasy As always the foolish one Don't tell me I already know I never heeded my advice My heart could never let go Hope ©2005 With graphic and music below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/91/poem_752334.html |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
isn't that always the way it is? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Too true, so well expressed! Eric |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"Ignoring my own advice I have to accept the breaks The foolish heart of mine Makes the same mistakes" don't we all? well said |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well I was fooled once...and that was enough for me I think when you hold back a part of you (doesn't matter which you it is m/f) then you aren't in a committed relationship and it is "foolish" to even strive for more. A lesson learned the hard way M |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
As I got older and having boyfriends my motto always was...."If it ain't going to work the first time, it isn't going to work the second time." Then I got married and that motto went out the window. I took him back not once but twice. I definately learned my lesson. But I walked away knowing I gave it my all and no one deserves to be treated like that. I love this write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, I'm embarrased to say, I used to be, a glutton for punishment...finally though and thru much support and many readings (thanks to PIP) I've grown, and now, once burned, twice becomes, not an issue...hehe.. thank you hope for a great write |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
HopeS...Tender and sad at the same time. Somehow I can't picture you being a fool even once. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me too...James |
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Tndeer1 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 87TN. USA |
I certainly know the feeling and it had been embedded in my heart for 14 yrs. until I gave up and got out. Hopefully with Gods help, it won't happen again. So far so good on this one I'm married to now. As of July 1st. we'll be married for 19 yrs. so I've passed the (what I call) DREADED MARK, LOL! Beautiful, heartfelt writing. Tndeer1 |
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