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Fools Gold
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Fools Gold |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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a treasure to be buried hidden in forgot remembered only when hurried of why gems are cut precious? ... ahh, such foolishness burdens to behold for where Love turns to hopelessness where it becomes Fools Gold "In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ctowen....this was perfect!  ....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nicely done! ~ though it's a sad sigh~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this has such a sad ache to it... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you ladies for the read and replies ... ... it does have that air of ache, omniscent of my own foolishness ... no doubt |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
i think it's safe to say, we've all been that fool, at one time or another  maybe that is why the ache is recognized so easily |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... if we have all felt it ... then maybe it isn't so foolish .... (adding to my list of learning from my friends) * thank you for your sweet smile |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda like how diamonds turn out to be broken glass after the crash |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
...yet even a fools gold can be beautiful to the eye... nicely written Tima |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Yes Tima ... I agree its why God gave us costume jewelry lol !! Thank you for the reply! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Enjoyed this. It isn't fools gold until someone else tells you so. (Ignorance can be bliss  )SG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
quote: "... it does have that air of ache, omniscent of my own foolishness ... no doubt" omniscient you're welcome |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Cute...Gold does seem to be a fools color...charming to the eye from the outside, yet not pure and real on the inside. not solid..100% ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
James - TY for the read my friend. SG - haha ... lets just say I feel "blissed" lol ARH - Hmmm .... I prefer silver ... or the pulsing red of a romantic heart!! Thank you all for your joyous replies ... they are much appreciated!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you express the sadness well through written word Craig. Nicely done, much enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a sad ache to this precious piece Craig. I so much enjoy your work. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you both, ladies .... doubt of my writing ability has clouded my visions these days but your replies are like rays of warm sunlight breaking away the darkness ... Thanks Bunches!! |
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