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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 There are moments when my composure will almost fail and I come so close to the tears I have no right to cry that’s when my soul screams ‘it should have been me’ ‘it should have been you’ and I just can’t understand what got in the way it’s then, your name falls in a sobbed whisper of ‘why’ knowing, there is no answer... ~SEA~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very touching write, SEA, your feelings shine through each word. Beautiful photo too. Is that you? ~tier  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA....deeply touching.....I understand these feelings. Beautiful write and photo.  ....jo |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
I loved your expression of feeling. Awesome write. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...and even if there was an answer it wouldn't satisfy...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh wow...I felt this to the bone |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... should a, could a, would a ... and ALL OF THE ABOVE!! "y" is not in "the meaning of life" ... .. but it is in "why not" ... Keep that smile .... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So touching and heartfelt Hope |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful heartfelt write Susan. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Perhaps the answer would hut even more? Nice write.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSEA~ Not only is the photo wonderful ... you've written an exquisite piece to compliment it~ You KNEW I'd love it~  Oh, how I do~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Deeply moving with such beautiful language. Eric |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
that was very nice and i do understand where your coming from  Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
no, that isn't me. I write the poem, then try to find a picture that will go with what I'm trying to say...and yeah, I don't know that any answer would be right, or enough... thank you all for your wonderful replies!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
time and again this muse gifts you with these classic "SEA-ache" writes that have become your lovely poetic trademark. If only the inspiration were enough to fill the void? you know my mothymotto... why ask why?  |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
***tears shed**** Under all of the hate i have, there a small portion where this hits. Excellent.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
deeply moving and bittersweet...hugs for a lovely picture to match pondering words... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes.... understanding this with tears. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, you always have the right to do this, Susan . . . no matter the circumstance. to the tears I have no right to cry it is our healing . . . and that px reminds me of one I have of me in Kauai where I am atop a mountain and just contemplating . . . everything, like the px above . . . just wondering where I am going and how I got to where I was . . . |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very emotionally beautiful! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
SEA...Enjoyed this touching write. But then why wouldn't I? it came from you...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very moving read........ Jenn E |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you have captured the feeling with the deepness that I have come to expect each time I click upon your name Sea... God...this is so very moving, and excellently written.  Give me your heart |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Good write Susan!!! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, me too. You read my mind. Lovely. Sandra |
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