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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2005-06-25 06:26 AM


These days the sky is mostly clear
with a view from here to there
and the stars appear as grinning seers
to light the darkest nights.

But when the clouds of life’s dismay
stay for a spell above
how burdened is a body, mind,
by the pressure of ill will
bearing down and flattening
the fullness of a heart.

And all spells come to stay
with bags of consequences
equipped for many changes
from winter into spring
and prepared like a boy scout
to turn me inside out.

It is ordained, it has to be,
this turn from inner out
for love like the sky  
must been seen to be believed
and then made immortal …
by the mind, it seems to me.

Forever in this state of mind
the sky spells out your name  
though clouds gather high above
and shoot darts into my heart
of your infidelity
to eternal spirit pacts.

Around the now thinness
of my heart once overfilled  
the spell of love is tied,
to love the spell of ordinance,  
and the spell of my belief
around this spell of grief
as padding and protection    
from the spell of consequence …
and I hope it is enough!  

Helen / 25 June 2005

© Copyright 2005 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-06-25 11:31 AM


Helen, may the spell of your belief, dispel all the grief that you have just expressed so eloquently.

You are grace, gentleness, and beauty personified, Dear Poetess.

Hugs with love,
Linda

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
2 posted 2005-06-25 12:08 PM


Wonderful insightful writing!

"...the spell of consequence..."  Indeed!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2005-06-26 02:04 PM


You keep growing in the depth you are able to capture with language and insight.

Eric

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2005-06-26 03:17 PM


It is enough to get you through, dear Helen.  Love is a spell, for sure, but I think your beliefs are stronger.   ....jo
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
5 posted 2005-06-26 04:13 PM


Linda, icebox, Eric & Jo - thank you so much for your kind comments.  Yes, Jo, love is a spell so many times cast over the unworthy and then, Eric, we have this thing emerging called "growth" and I wonder ... what's it all for?
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