Open Poetry #35 |
Birdbrains |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Bored or tired She’ll probably give in Just to get him— To stop doing that |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I know that one to well. Though I am usually more stubborn(; -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very diplomatic write! LOL...enjoyed this one, John! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmmmm, sounds like two children... but, as always, enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and thus, rewards for bad behavior... enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL...enjoyed! |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
That made me giggle... The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Geez... how many times have I thought that very same thing... hehe "If I just give in... he'll stop that!!" I loved this, most definetely a KEEPER |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
learned behavior. tsk. very nice John. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Of course. You tell a whole story in four lines, and engage me emotionally too. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*giggling* Opps...sounds about right sometimes...*hugs* |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"Bored or tired" here is in your poem. I used it too in my "Sigh". I did not steal from you. but i am very honored that I chose some words that a good poet was using. feel good. |
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