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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-06-23 07:33 AM


I have found

I have found life feeds upon life
Even though I’ve taken a wife
I am just a part of its chain
And I’ll give back all I have slain

A merry-go round of arrange
A simple interchange
Except for the nature of dream
Now there I have touched the extreme

It seems to me an open door
A path into the evermore
And I have walked its awe of lace
Into the state of utter grace

I hope and wish and even fish
To make myself a humble dish
To linger in this state of grace
Perhaps to give the wind a taste

On second thought I think I do
Perhaps within each mornings dew



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-06-23 07:39 AM


OMG why of course you do, you silly!

lovely write, as always

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-06-23 08:31 AM


Chuckling at Lee's "silly"...

You're a treasure trove...
and the more you give,
multiplies what you receive...






scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2005-06-23 08:38 AM


Yes you "dew" Sy.  Much enjoyed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-06-23 09:06 AM


LeeJ
Thank you sweet and good morning to you.

Sunshine
Sounds good to me.

scorpio
Yes I "dew" thank you.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2005-06-23 09:09 AM


Seymour~

Life feeding upon life ... I like that thought~

'It seems to me an open door
A path into the evermore
And I have walked its awe of lace
Into the state of utter grace'


And ... I hope you fully realize just how *graced* I feel to read your thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-06-23 10:29 AM


Marge,
You are a sweet heart.

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2005-06-23 11:28 AM


It seems to me an open door
A path into the evermore
And I have walked its awe of lace
Into the state of utter grace


I agree wtih Marge...and enjoy reading you each morning...the one constant in my life

hugs
M

Martie
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8 posted 2005-06-23 12:17 PM


Sy

"I hope and wish and even fish
To make myself a humble dish
To linger in this state of grace
Perhaps to give the wind a taste"

Me too, but not as well as you!  

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9 posted 2005-06-23 12:30 PM


Wonderful wonderful write Sy!!!
Sending hugs and luv your way~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

suthern
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10 posted 2005-06-23 02:51 PM


And I have walked its awe of lace
Into the state of utter grace

You do linger there, my friend... and we all are richer because you do. *S* Excellent write! *S*

adagio
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11 posted 2005-06-23 03:45 PM


Very well done work!
Agreeing with all the above
Keep flowing please

passing shadows
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12 posted 2005-06-24 05:11 AM


somehow I missed this one
glad I went back

you are a gem

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-06-24 08:21 AM


passing,
And you are a flower.

Startime55
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14 posted 2005-06-24 11:23 AM


BRAVO!!!...I am so glad you share with us what you have found...I find your words both uplifting and inspiring...Another gem of yours is added to the treasure you create....*big hugs*

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-06-24 11:32 AM


Startime55
Love your comments.

MARK V SHELDON
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16 posted 2005-06-24 10:13 PM


In other words:  Poetic Karma...  a circle of inspired reading and writing which you offer every morning (which still awes me, by the way...).  Thanks for the ponder...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2005-06-24 10:46 PM


MARK,
Always a pleasure Mark

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