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Verb In A Sunbonnet
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Verb In A Sunbonnet |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A beautiful man is hard made Of the seas in mirror of the sky Such that gentle sounds command his footsteps Stunning does he shape the stars In strong hands, climbing and clawing at the moon Reasoning in fact, the ambitions of prowess and cool That a woman would curl close beside him Draw blood upon a living soul that would harm him Fight disciple and thief in his defense, without reserve His luster is her own regard To beat within the spring of early morning Her eyes revive and stir his shores to madness As daybreak gleams upon his body She recalls the muscle tone and smiles the sun Aware of every shimmer shone and new, and shades her eyes To see Copyright Kkh 02/23/05 |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
great write Kathy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
His luster is her own regard To beat within the spring of early morning Her eyes revive and stir his shores to madness I adore your poetry, Kathleen. It is beyond beautiful, and so much more. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“That a woman would curl close beside him Draw blood upon a living soul that would harm him Fight disciple and thief in his defense, without reserve” . What man could resist such a woman? This writing, your words, carve “LOVE” in that summer’s shade tree in the memories of so long ago. Youth, a seemingly endless time, an unbreakable bond between a young man and young woman, and so picturesque. This one, as so many of your writings, brings such warmth, and has so much depth. This is a beauty. A Verb From Your Heart. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD Your title really caught me with delight, then the whole poem was filled with the way it is to love a man, just so.  |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
To find such a woman is a lucky man indeed! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
TD, When reading this sensual poem, images flashed by suggesting a novel... Hm. I wonder, have you ever attempted one? Very pretty! misce |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From the title throughout every line... a  of the first degree!Libraried, and Spotlighted! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'His luster is her own regard' Ahhh, this sighs the day~ Thank you for being a *gifted* poetess~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Next time, put your sunglasses on as you sit and drool. OK? Nice write Kiddo... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"That a woman would curl close beside him Draw blood upon a living soul that would harm him Fight disciple and thief in his defense, without reserve" Webster couldn't have said it better... Beauty in words. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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