Open Poetry #35 |
The Call |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
In welcome bows my honesty and I purportedly can hear the call of need despairingly from someone in the atmosphere. Answer I and seek to find ways and means of knowing more but in my open state of mind my name at birth and that’s all. Only love, a mother’s love, sends easily through time and space the needs of all around, above, for me to swivel about face. And from out of my complacency comes the forceful feel of soul to suffer not love’s energy the wayward days of old. Dealt a royal flush of hearts my cards, their cards, as one today await the call or fold of past too scared to breathe, to pray. Such is the way of those who care somewhere up there in God’s own air! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen "Only love, a mother’s love, sends easily through time and space the needs of all around, above, for me to swivel about face." Only love....yes, and a mother's love is so pure...but love itself has the power...any kind. Feeling this poem, dear friend. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
to you, Helen. No doubt here you will be put to work quickly! luv ya, jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, Martie. Yes, you're right but in this instance I firmly believe it was a mother's love. Some mothers never stop worrying about their children, you know. This one, I think, has a particular bond ... and I guess she suffers the frustration of most mothers when children think they know better. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely written |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Such is the way of those who care somewhere up there in God’s own air!" Yep! Great write. JL |
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