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Monster Under the Bed (with pic of the monster)(for my girls)
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Monster Under the Bed (with pic of the monster)(for my girls) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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“Mommy she said there’s a MONSTER under my bed come quick, look, his eyes are red” “what I said, there’s no monster under your bed” I fear little one you’ve completely lost your head” “well I can see his eyes and hear his growl, and he moved a little closer to the edge just now” “and see look there’s his paw trying to grab me she said” “mommy I swear there’s a monster under my bed” “ok I am coming to see what the fuss is about”, and she stared at me with those big green eyes excited and nervous as I took a look to find she was right in the dark hour of this night a Monster under the bed and his eyes did glow red so I put my hands in to pull him out and as I did she gave a shout "see I told ya so" as her eyes lit up he didn’t growl or look so tough in fact he was cute with his little green eyes and then she looked at me in surprise a little giggle escaped her lips and she said “OH hunter” its only you and she gave him a kiss then I knew she’d go back to sleep with sweet dreams and all as I left her room and headed down the hall I swear again she giggled and said hey mommy told ya so to the monster under the bed….. ~~~~ Meet the little Monster Under the Bed Hunter…..   I keep a fragrance bottle my muse gave me when I met him in endless winter and he settled me into remembering who I am. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So cute Lauren... I remember going through almost the same situations with my own when they were little. Love this! Hugs to you pretty lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
it is the little things that mean so much .... .... we all should have such monsters ... lol |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The power of the imagination. Glad it was only Hunter. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am smiling, so big here... lovely and heartwarming Lauren. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
::chuckling::: monster indeed....lol nice ma'am.. nice |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah Lauren this was so cute, and very sweet. Nice to see a little green-eyed rhyme for the girls too. I bet they love the stories their Mommy tells too  |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
How cute!!! This is excelent! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
That is so cute -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how adorable! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren You capture the heart with this! But I'm curious about the monster in the closet?  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Cute cat and a sweetheart of a write, Lauren~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I miss having a cat...LOL with my dogs?! It'd be chewed to bits!  and I like your new pic!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
awwww, so adorable... Loved this so much, brought back some very heafty smiles and memories. Thank you Lauren. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
LOL...this is a wonderfully adorable poem...I am going to print it off and read it to my grandchildren...Wonderful...*big hugs* |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very much enjoyed everyone should have a monster like that! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes it's just shocking, the things that will become sweet memories. When you're 95, this moment...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God, you have a children's book there, Lauren, I am NOT kidding . . . publish this! My son would ADORE this . . . |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
LOL he is a little monster, sleeps all day then wants to play all night....When Alacia Grace called me in there the other night, I thought she was just having a bad dream....but it was hunter playing under the bed....(thank goodness) and her eyes lit up so big when mommy pulled him out....we all had a laugh, and she went right back to sleep.....sigh all is well that ends well....thank you for enjoying this as much as I did....I appreciate the comments.....and true we all need a little monster such as this, to keep life interesting....hugssss all...much love and sweet dreams... I keep a fragrance bottle my muse gave me when I met him in endless winter and he settled me into remembering who I am. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh... this is delightful... and makes me want to hug both "monster" and child! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ You brought back some tender memories with this one~ One of ours was called the "YaHa Monster" ... and then we had the "Not ME Monster" ...  Each of my four children have special memories of the monsters that lived at our home when they were small~ This is surely a  moment for you~AND ... for them when they grow up~ (OH, Heaven forbid ... but they do exactly that !) *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes A delightful read. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chuckling.... kids will say anything to upset their siblings... |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
This one was warm, touching and quite humorous, too. ~ Enjoyed! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was great and I am very glad I went digging beyond the "today's topics" page to the pages I have missed while out.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
LOL Suthern, the little monster (the cat) would hug ya back....he's toooo cute, the child would too.... Marge~ I giggled as I know the 'not me' monster and the 'who done it' monster.... Hey SY thank you for popping in... Karilea..LOL her eyes were so big, and big sister slept through it all JCP...hey there, thank you and good to see you... Susan~ thank you....hugsssss Muwwwaaahhhsss and Hugsssss I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I've seen this monster under my own bed. This is a fun read.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Lauren! I so enjoyed this! My daughter has a cat named Homer who looks almost like yours. What a trip! Made me giggle, too. ....jo |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
precious write, precious memory thank you for sharing this with us |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
CUTE! |
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