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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-06-21 07:06 AM

6 out of Saugerties
setting up stage
strings and tuned keys
and piss colored booze,
in tie dyed tiarra,
she taps on the cirrus clouds,
and to the music
Adrienne grooves,

the gypsy calypso
moths on the sycamore,
Joe speaks of gardens
and rhymes with eyes blue,

in a grass colored pedicure,
the fabulous Adrienne,
becomes a kaleiodscope,
and o how she grooves,

on this stage of the moment,
the sun pouring manna,
the tumbling greenery
exhippes on hills,
reminisce on the mountaintops,
beerbellied but kickin' it,

while Adriennes' dancing,
and o how she moves,

in shaded sombrero,
the sun plays its requiem
the sky starred marquise comes
the crowds leave with tunes,

in this collage of lost angels,
somewhere the faithful dance
like eternity's flowerchild
to the beat of the groove.

(for my favorite cousin)

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-23-2005 07:37 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-06-21 09:51 AM

dang girl...you rock!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-06-21 11:18 AM

WOW!!! Your words sure help us to feel both your grooves....Wonderful...*hugs*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-06-21 11:41 AM

F A N T A S T I C ! !

Wonderful write Michele..
made me want to get up and boogie.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-06-21 12:53 PM

Michele, you are one groovy Goddess!

Linda

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-06-21 06:51 PM

WOW!

seems "the groove" runs in the family.

this is one of my favs

a

mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2005-06-22 12:17 PM

You've got the beat, and then some!!!
Excellent writing oh blonde goddess wonder!!!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2005-06-22 01:24 AM

"in this collage of lost angels,
somewhere the faithful dance
like eternity's flowerchild
to the beat of her groove."

Think I'd like her alot, Michelle, you groovy lady you!! Could envision this.

.....jo

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2005-06-23 01:08 AM

*smiling here*

I wish I could have been there with you.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

9 posted 2005-06-24 06:12 AM

Excellent!
No one could read this and not feel the groove....
enjoyed
----------ice
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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2005-06-24 08:11 AM

ohhh boy, this makes me want to get up and move to the groove....wonderful writing and a great tribute from one heck of a lady to another...enjoyed, mucho muches....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2005-06-24 10:11 AM

oh this is one of my favorites of yours!

alliterations too!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2005-06-24 10:19 AM

good read

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