caught within moments (duet Littlewing and SEA)

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2005-02-24 04:25 PM

I am caught within moments.

Memories attempt, desperately
to hold me over
until I can be close, once again.

It's nothing more
than fleeting pictures, a slideshow of life
blinding me, scarring my vision
melding fantasy to reality;
until I am battered, bruised and bleeding.

It's nothing less
than sentimental moments,
frozen and embittered
stoic, settled in my bones,
which gasp for air,
needing to scream and breathe.

and so I breathe...
try to still the silence
before the ache of you
shatters the sound of alone
into shards of angry, unintelligible
fragments of speech

wrenching emotions dry
clearing my thoughts of you
wishing only for that clarity
to hold me over,
until I can be close again.

~Littlewing, and SEA

*thank you so much Sue for writing with me!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-02-24 04:36 PM

Beautiful duet by two beautiful Passions poets!!
Lovely lovely...a keeper for my library for sure!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-02-24 04:37 PM

Gosh, neither of you needs a man! You two are joined at the ~ wrists! ~ with both of you holding onto one pen! I truly could not tell where one of you stopped and the other began!

A perfect blend of poetic talent!

Linda

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-02-24 04:39 PM

Wonderful duet....brava !!
hugs, Chris

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-02-24 07:48 PM

Yes, a wonderful compliment to each other - well done

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2005-02-24 11:03 PM

beautiful!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

6 posted 2005-02-25 12:41 PM

thanks so much for reading and replying, I had a blast doing this with Sue, she is completely awesome!

My weakness is that I care too much
My scars remind me that the past is real
I tear my heart open just to feel
~Papa Roach

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-02-25 08:57 AM

You guys are way too good to us, sheesh, it was all Susan, don't let that innocent face fool you!

Thank you for the awesome replies, it truly was easy writing with you, Susan, you made it very easy . . . thank you.

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2005-02-25 11:12 AM

wrenching emotions dry
clearing my thoughts of you
wishing only for that clarity
to hold me over,
until I can be close again.

I would not have expected less than perfection from a melding of words between you two, and I can see that I was not wrong. Lovely dueting ladies...just lovely..

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2005-02-25 11:49 AM

wonderfully done you two....would love to see more! hugsssssX2....

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

10 posted 2005-02-25 11:58 AM

well done you two!!

Rf

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

11 posted 2005-02-25 04:44 PM

Loved the clarity and sentimental moments,
but most especially, the reality in between.

Very pretty duet, Lady Susan's

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2005-02-25 04:50 PM

You blend together so very well... seamless collaboration! *S* Well done!

Cloud 9
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Ca

13 posted 2005-02-25 06:21 PM

This is beautiful.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

14 posted 2005-02-25 07:02 PM

I think I know, I think I know, I think...
you know...
who wrote what...but it blended as one,
and that is a true duet.

Brava Ladies...

you are both something quite wonderful,
and I love you both.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2005-02-26 08:27 AM

Thank you everyone, for such beautiful comments. I am so happy you liked this write, it was all Susan, I swear.

And Kari? We love you too . . .

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2005-02-26 09:03 AM

SEA~ and LittleWing~
Such a gifted penning~

Each thought blends into the next ... word-binding~

*Huglets* to both of you~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Ringo

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Saluting with misty eyes

17 posted 2005-02-26 09:55 AM

And now we all understand why I have missed the blue pages so much......

Both of you are completely unbelievable alone, so why would anyone be at all suprised when this turned out as phenominal as it did.

Duet again!!!!

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2005-02-26 09:59 AM

Nice...James

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

19 posted 2005-02-26 12:41 PM

Sue says, "You guys are way too good to us, sheesh, it was all Susan, don't let that innocent face fool you!"

I don't

Ask her about her body art sometime.

Brother gals, you got me here I can't pick who is who this time around, and that is a good thing!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

20 posted 2005-02-27 08:49 AM

OMG you guys are so very good to us, thank you again, when Susan gets back she will thank you guys too.

*laughing at Sharon* what?? we are two very innocent Susans . . .

Thanks guys, truly . . .

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

21 posted 2005-02-27 08:54 AM

SEA & littlewing,
Two doves on the fly, delightful.

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....

22 posted 2005-02-27 06:33 PM

WOW...

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

Midnitesun

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Gaia

23 posted 2005-02-27 09:04 PM

you've both caught me
in a ~moment~
but then, that was the intent, wasn't it?
LOL

D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx

24 posted 2005-02-27 10:04 PM

This is a very nicely penned piece from the both of you.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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Posts 22676
with you

25 posted 2005-02-28 09:51 AM

thank you all so much for the wonderful replies! Don't let that Sue fool you, she is awesome, and really did most of this. Hopefully we will get a chance to do this again...

My weakness is that I care too much
My scars remind me that the past is real
I tear my heart open just to feel
~Papa Roach

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