Open Poetry #35 |
Eternal Treasure |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
To touch a mighty hand, to rest within a grasp, to hold a thought of remembrance. To walk a shore of sprinkled sand, to wade the brine of reeds...To ever hold you close though all is now but dust. To climb a capped peak and feel the eyes of God....and wish to once again just say....Though words fail, I love you my father. And, in my voice, my eyes, the tremor of my own hands....the smile that will never wane...in these, all these...you are here within.... within me... Happy Father’s Day .... for I, your greatest gift...do love and treasure you immensely, eternally....till time brings us together once more. [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-19-2005 12:17 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A beautiful write. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Magnus, Beautiful write, so tender and full of love. SG |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your dear Father smiles from Above, dear Barry, you are such a beautiful son. And your words show your heart and beauty so well. Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Totally touching~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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