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Daddy is gone
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Daddy is gone |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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A repost on Father's day. Written for my friend Katie after her dad passed away, but I know there are many others whose daddy's may have never died, but are gone just the same... ~ Hush little girl Hush little girl Daddy is gone, and the world doesn't turn right now. Don't you cry Don't you cry time spins on, and you die a little more, everyday. And if you hold on, I'll hold on to you. If you let go then I'll carry you through, little girl. [This message has been edited by GG (06-18-2005 06:21 PM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
GG, a very caring repost for your friend. There are many who have lost their parents and miss them, and dedicating it to them all is just so like you.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 dang...this aches in me |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You dear girl...I lost my Daddy on New Years day three years ago. It's a very hard thing to go through. You have a sweet heart. Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Only after his death, did I know what it felt like not to have a dad right there. My heart always pains for those whose dads could be there for them. Thank you, little one. This is a reminder to all fathers of just how much they are truly needed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hi, GG darlin'. It is so good to see your writing again. As you know...I've been away from here quite awhile, but I'm hanging around a little here again. Hope you are well, dear friend. Your writing is so full of compassion.  ......jo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Alyssa? you are such a gentle soul . . . I need this for one that has passed, one who is living and one who bears the same name as my son. Thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Soft and loving reminder ... Your caring heart reaches out beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Mysteria, really I should be honest and say I'm not even sure if I ever actually gave this to her. But it was for her just the same. I don't want anyone whose hurt to be left hurting with no words of comfort... and I know it's not the same coming from someone you don't know, but I wanted to dedicate to all for even just an ounce of comfort that it might bring... Thanks for your reply  Dix,  I know, lady, I know ...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
JustBleu, I can't even imagine. I'm so very sorry for the pain of what you've gone through with that. I hope somehow you were able to find some peace in the day. Thanks for your words...Sunshine, you know, I hadn't even thought of how this could be a reminder to father's, how great of you to think of that as well. It's just me and my dad that live here and while I may want to move out and may not see eye to eye with him I'm still so blessed to have him around. I'm so heartbroken for those who've... well, who've had their hearts broken. God bless you, and thank you for your reply...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
James, thank ya jo, i've been away as well, though sadly I'm not seeing me being around a whole lot anytime soon. Things could change, though. I'm not well, but I'm okay, and that's good enough for right now I hope that life is running as smooth as possible for you. Take care of yourself... I'm so glad you took the time to comment ...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
littlewing, I know that I'm late coming back to reply, but I hope the day went by okay. There's something so easy about caring for someone when you know they're going to take that, turn around, and care for others as well. I love that about you. Thank you.Margherita, Thank you so much. I'm honored you took the time to read and reply... I hope that the day was a peaceful one for you. Ser, yeah... Always, Alyssa - who's off to camp for a week. He was a man of sorrows |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...very powerful! Eric |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Eric, thank you Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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