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soul sip savor
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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you tap into my wellspring of love lust longing the need to know and be known to be enveloped within the warm of your manskin wanting sip of my soul swallow my heart that all I am may become part of you and thus all that you are becomes part of me – entwined in essence ceasing the lonely filling the hollow to overflow the divine s.a..t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Eloquent and lovely, the last stanza in particular a poignant reflection of a prevailing malady. To fill and be filled. Indigo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your cup runneth over! ~ and I believe it does! ~ and you write of it so eloquently.   Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
flowing divinity pouring sipping drink of love i feel like a lush about to gush this is how its meant to be aint it? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"filling the hollow to overflow the divine" Yes, well said! It's how it should be but most times isn't. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"sip of my soul" . . . if this is a sample, it will surely be the sip that refreshes  beautiful poetry, Susan.Rf |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susan whisper seeping the sigh slippery of gloving blend you are love songs |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you my friends for your warm and your encouragement - each reply is a twinkle of pleasure in my eye and a beat of my heart in gratitude - Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Very fulfilling, and I feel as if even reading this the love is splashing out onto everyone who reads. Quite lovely! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
p.s. thanks dear - GG - so sweet, my friend - thanks dear Hugs - s |
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