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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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We Are We are but stardust passing here A Transference, is all I fear A platitude with some latitude Or I might say some attitude We are within a process field And do not know the next step yield A change upon a serving dish And naught of what we want or wish This ego of our inner core Is but a heart beat nothing more And what we dream are visions bends And has no meaning in the end I’m just a bit of stardust who Spent time and love and life with you And gave whatever I could give To help the whole in which I live I’ll never know what’s really true Except the fact that I love you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"stardust" is one of my favorite alltime songs...and hey? I think I'm just beginning to understand--a sure sign I've got it all wrong!  but hey? it's gotta go somewhere, why not stardust? I have a hunch that poet ink is made of that. I know YOURS is, anyhow.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Why you're just a beautiful hunk of stardust and so is your pen and ink. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those with rightly placed attitude always have my gratitude... and you? have my    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sy your words touch my heart again... Wonderful write!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this Sy especially the ending |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You WILL know, you are MORE than stardust, you are a child of eternity, dear Seymour. I love your ponderings, expressed with your usual mastery! BUT, the secret lies in LOVE, and that's what you have done and continue to do down here ... that's the MISSION! And all else will fall into place and everything will acquire meaning. Sunday morning homily! haha Love and hugs, Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seymour I love those sprinkles of stardust you send this way , in your caring , loving way Hope |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A platitude with some latitude Or I might say some attitude ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now thats a Randy couplet!!  Im headed out the door but wanted to pop in and say Happy Fathers Day me sweet Sy-guy. *ww*  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much enjoyed your sprinkles of stardust today Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bridgette, delightful comment. passing, Love you. Margherita And you are a delight. HopeS Hope and hugs back JM, Thank you tink, WW scorpio Enjoyed sprinkling the dust. LOL |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sy? Now this reminded me of Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young, the stardust . . . "we are stardust, we are golden . . . and we've got to get our -selves . . baacckk to theee garrrr-arrrrr-dennnn" I have missed you, sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing And I have missed you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I’m just a bit of stardust who Spent time and love and life with you And gave whatever I could give To help the whole in which I live I’ll never know what’s really true Except the fact that I love you You old softy... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I’ll never know what’s really true Except the fact that I love you" ~ I'll make an angel's wager, that to her, nothing else would ever really matter.  To everlasting love, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Thank you my friend. Earth Angel You betcha. Hugs and |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And that's enough to know... the rest can be learned together. *S* This is very beautiful, Seymour... I love it! *S* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
ah  your so good, and a romantic heart  you give so much joy to all thanks for the smiles and flowers you give My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern, I can omly quote yourself. "And that's enough to know... the rest can be learned together." MGROVES Thank you, |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Seymour, This is so romantic, so sweet. I really enjoyed the senitment in this. Thanks for this post. You are one of my very favorites. Your writing brings back romance in my life. SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SimplyGold, Now that is a happy thought. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A romantically beautiful poem that touches the heart with the magic of stardust...*big hugs* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well, sir, I do like this piece but especially ... "We are within a process field And do not know the next step yield A change upon a serving dish And naught of what we want or wish" I don't know really but I'd like to think that our dreams have meaning in the end - please let me think that ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Depending on the end they do have meaning. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 A little star dust is good from time to time. |
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