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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2005-02-24 12:01 PM

I dreamed I dreamed:
Three walls
Three corners
Above me stars
Below cold darkness

The stars fell into the room
like sand from an hourglass,
collecting randomly on the three walls
as words

A figure appeared below
in the cold darkness
Looking up, she opened her mouth
and swallowed all the words
from the three walls
and slowly began to speak...

"Past
Present
Future
Three realities
all the same

Find one
you find them all
Truth is beauty
Beauty, truth

Make the corners straight
awake
and be free"

Finished, and completely
she disappeared
into the cold darkness
~~~
Sunlight pouring in
wash away my secret sin
reveal the truth, not again
'till nights next coming.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-02-24 12:05 PM

WOW! This is so cool....

really enjoyed this

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2005-02-24 02:19 PM

This is extremely beautiful in a very
etheral way, Robert. Thank you for
this delightful gift of read.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2005-02-24 03:51 PM

Robert

What a beautiful dream and some good wisdom words shared...thank you.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-02-24 04:20 PM

Methinks there be more to you than meets my third eye!

A dream such as this is very special ~ and you imparted it to your readers with a fine tipped quill.

EA

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-02-24 07:49 PM

enjoyed the sense of the surreal -

susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-02-24 08:10 PM

It is such a delight to read you...much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-02-24 10:40 PM

what an awesome dream!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2005-02-24 10:56 PM

I must read this again! A very interesting dream and write!

miscellanea

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-03-03 04:50 PM

Your muse is lovely, Robert.
Consider this a

and libraried!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

10 posted 2005-03-03 05:21 PM

I've got some bad news for ya - your description of the room with no ceiling, crooked walls, and no floor - that's Toerag's trailer half-way into Tornado season - you pick the year - lol.

More seriously, though - nice touch of surreal here - lots of good imagery to hold the image there while you expanded on the theme. Nice work.

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