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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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i am full of wings wet as the dawn in your blue awakening O my Goddess open your sea to me let me drop to the depths of you heavy as a pebble "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" Michael Hutchence (INXS) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Maree, this is STUNNING  loved this!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brevity is sweet! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Whoaaa!!!!! amazing! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
full of wings wet as the dawn in your blue awakening ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ not pebbles darlin.... diamonds...rubies, emeralds... jewels... your poetry is full of em.  lovely lovely poetess Maree Dont give up on me ... I'm about to come alive ... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh I like the feel of this one. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
  can you tell i liked this one!! bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
brevity looks soooo good on you Bella! You wrapped it all up right tight in this beauty. Miss ya gal! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree You brought out the passion so easily with these words of the poem within you.  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Stunning Maree! I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and the rings you leave behind reverberate forever...  a pebble? naw a pearl...yes  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Great write! Enjoyed! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome perspective, Maree! ....jo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
all i ask is that i get to watch, or at the very least send pics. beautiful and expressive, the poem too. hugs |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Susan, thank you sweets and for the Kari, thank you. LeeJ, thank you for the Whoaaa, much appreciated. Janet Marie... you always say the nicest things. Thank you. Pilgrimage, thank you for stopping by and for your lovely reply. bslicker *smiling* thank you and yes! GS, thanks Bella. Miss you too. Martie, thank you...i miss you too. Tried the vegemite yet? lol Lauren, glad you think so, I thank you. M'lady, a pearl? I should be able to string up a strand for you...yes? Thank you m'love.HoneyBunch, glad you enjoyed *smile* thanks for stopping by. Iliana, thanks for the "awesome" hugs Bello? thank you....and ..tsk tsk. :hug: "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" Michael Hutchence (INXS) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey Darksis...Loved the darkblue in this. But, was then distracted by "Elegantly Wasted" A poem in its own right. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Ed, thank you m'bro.."elegantly wasted" not my words..Michael Hutchence - INXS mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
There's passion in this....very nice write!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is so profound that you completely blew me away, nothing more needing to be said, Maree - you sparked what inner discord lies within each of our souls, and I thank you for the enlightenment. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely a keeper! Beautiful work. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
So beautiful, this casual water-color vignette.... Classic Maree! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh my. this unleases pure want. very well done! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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