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Justbleu
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0 posted 2005-06-16 11:13 PM



My dreams fade in the winter still
As I gaze upon the slip of time
The aches of my soul do spill
My dreams fade in the winter still
Leaving me silent as I lose my will
Sounding in my thoughts in chime
My dreams fade in the winter still
As I gaze upon the slip of time


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink



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1 posted 2005-06-16 11:53 PM


this is really beautiful good to read you again!
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2 posted 2005-06-17 09:28 AM


Welcome home!
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3 posted 2005-06-17 09:30 AM


simply lovely
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4 posted 2005-06-17 02:58 PM


enjoyed this little jewel of time.
speaking of time, good to see ya
bernie

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5 posted 2005-06-17 03:34 PM


Sadness fills this poem...Let the warmth of summer heat your heart from the inside out as it takes away winter chill...*hugs*

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6 posted 2005-06-17 03:34 PM


I like this poem.

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7 posted 2005-06-17 07:45 PM


Nice writing....James
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8 posted 2005-06-17 08:01 PM


Very much enjoyed this piece Bridgette.
And..yes, welcome home!!
Hugs~Nancy

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dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2005-06-20 12:41 PM


"My dreams fade in the winter still
As I gaze upon the slip of time
The aches of my soul do spill"

This speaks volumes... how many voices must you have echoed on this night, with this write.

Beautifully done m'friend

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