navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Remembering
Open Poetry #35
Post A Reply Post New Topic Remembering Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Yogi
Member
since 2001-11-05
Posts 68


0 posted 2005-06-16 01:54 PM



Sitting Alone as Darkness Falls
Staring As My Shadow Slowly Fades
To A Place Were You Once Stood
Dancing To The Silent Whisper Of Warm Candlelight

Recalling The Times When We Were Together
Happier Times Full Of Laughter And Smiles
Holding Hands, Touching lips As The Rain Silently Fell Around Us
Making Love Under The Stars, Showing The Angels The Love We Shared

I Laid Rose Petals To The Bedroom
Lit Candles For The Romance Of A Midnight Bathe
Holding So Gentle We Felt Our Hearts Embrace
Even Dancing To Love Songs Under The Midday Sun
The Little Things That Made Us Smile

You Used To Say, Together Forever, Our Hearts Are One, Soul Mates
I Still To This Day Don’t Know What Went Wrong    
I Still Remember The Night You Left
You Left Without Saying Goodbye
What Did I Do, Or Say
Cause I Am Nothing Without You
Guess I Am Now Lost, Lost Forever


© Copyright 2005 Yogi - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2005-06-16 01:57 PM


Nothing is ever lost forever and your heartfelt words tell that there is an abundant amount of love in you to give to one who deserves the special gifts you have....*hugs*

saved_by_grace
Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332
In the arms of God...
2 posted 2005-06-16 05:47 PM


WOW, Yogi, this was amazing!  Reading your words...my mind went to a place of remembering for me.  So many things in your poem struck a cord with me...a longing in my heart for the love I lost.  Like you...I think it is gone forever, but maybe one day God will see fit to give us both another shot.  Startime is right...just need to give it to the right person...someone that deserves that kind of love and won't abuse it.

Take care...Becka

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Remembering

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary