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Passions Clutch
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Passions Clutch So blue the light that fills the sky That beckons me release and fly To open sight on visions dream Let fingers trail in stardust stream A phantom thought cannot escape The magic weave of loves landscape There flowers nod beneath the sun While fairies dance about in fun A brook sings as it trickles by Chasing a playful butterfly Trees swaying in mystical dance With leafy shadows to enhance Perfect day in just the right place Where fantasy can keep apace Among the warmth of summers heat Magic and reality meet Where winds caress with gentle touch Two lovers found in passions clutch Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer June 16, 2005 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...this is beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 For me this is a pleasure to read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words are sprinkles of star dust! ~ magical, romantic star dust!  Simply lovely! Love & Star Light, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such beautiful imagery! And the above words just make me want to run and hug the trees and share in their mystical dance! Highly enjoyed. Love, Margherita  |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
Not sure of what I can say here that hasn't already been said...so I will just say (again) that this is so beautiful!! Take care...  ...Becka |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karen It is always a pleasure to read your fine words of love and romance. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Karen , such beautiful images portrayed and expressed so wonderfully Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Perfect day in just the right place Where fantasy can keep apace Among the warmth of summers heat Magic and reality meet Where winds caress with gentle touch Two lovers found in passions clutch this was with such radiance and tender voice....loved this thank you for sharing |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
nice write Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Thank you so much for your beautiful replies...they mean a lot to me...I just had to write this poem...The visions created by Seymour Tabin's incredible words are what inspired me...*big hugs* to you all.... |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is one of your best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the flow here is perfect and yes, it's very beautiful!  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love the mushy stuff..... Beautiful!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful indeed. The images jump from within this whole piece. Enjoyed this read. <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... ahhh ... these are the writings I recall nice reading you!! ... always! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karen.. Hope you had a great birthday! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
O, Karen; Karen Louise; forever in my heart and dreams Even after all these years. What must you be like in person? Surely it must be the place where real and the imagined meet ... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen, what a nice poem. I have missed reading you. Sandra |
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