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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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For you, I strip myself of all pretense exposing the now of want, the need to feel the edges of innocence, contentment the goal. Pillowed thoughts lay me awake playing over and over until emotions sigh me to sleep. I see the face too serious and the lips too moist and the eyes that pierce the darkness, remembering that first kiss and the transfer of tomorrow into today. I reflect upon the heart and paint the still life that may be, could be, when time is not wasted as I stand before you naked with only my words. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very nicely penned Maureen...smiling at you. Enjoyed this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynterOfBliss~ Each time I read you ... I find a thought that wants to cling to the nib of the poetess in me~ 'Pillowed thoughts lay me awake' I mean ... how thoughtfully inspiring is that ? VERY !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh yeah, that's a good one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah...but such words that clothe you in the brilliance of who you are....This poem reveals to us the nature of love that you have to give...Magnificent...*big hugs* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maureen, this is a beautiful one. ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have bared your soul so beautifully, dear Maureen! Love, Margherita |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
if only you could know how deeply this touches  amazing....oh you know I am keeping this!!  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, this is so beautiful. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
(((((M)))))) good write bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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