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Dust In My Eyes
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Dust In My Eyes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Dust In My Eyes Shadows cast upon the sea Darkness slows the quick of me. While doubt tears away the sail I cannot wait much more the bale. Those truths and phantoms that exist All things that I cannot resist Please pity me this aging shell Make known to me the timeless spell. Oh spirit that I feel and fear That echoes chaos in my ear. Pendulums my minds desire Burns me in consuming fire. Let me trust eternity The feel of loves fraternity Just one moment’s flight of peace Just one moment of release Forever lifts me on its wings Yet still I see the dust of things. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's because beneath fragility, lies the breath of reality... Ah, good. You're making me think this morning... and now, a good one you've made it!    |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, I too find much to ponder in this write. It stirs the mind. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Make known to me the timeless spell.' 'Let me trust eternity The feel of loves fraternity' My friend, I have NO doubt that you have come to know the both of these~ Thanking you for this daily dose of Seymour-Thought-A-Graphs~ *Huglets*:hugs to you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Let me trust eternity The feel of loves fraternity Just one moment’s flight of peace Just one moment of release" I liked this very much!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just my kind of write well done Sy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good morning and well done Sy! I'm on the run...blowing kisses and I'm out the door. Hugs~Nancy |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The wind caresses soft my mind With visions of this treasured find Such words that open wide to me The joy of spirit soaring free The visions you paint touch this reader with a magic that sets flight to the imagination...Your work is a treasure to be savored for its delicate flavor like a fine wine....Wonderful writing...you inspire me with your talented visions...*big hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love.  scorpio And so it was ment. Marge Thank yopu sweety. SEA I thank you very much. passing Thank you dear. Nancy Don't run so fast you'll miss the Startime55 And you have just buttered my bread. LOL |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Beautiful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cloud 9 Thank you. |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
Let me trust eternity The feel of loves fraternity Just one moment’s flight of peace Just one moment of release Forever lifts me on its wings Yet still I see the dust of things. This was so beautiful, Sy!! Glad I stopped by this lovely day to read you!  Take care, good buddy! .... Becka |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Forever lifts me on its wings Yet still I see the dust of things. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well then...I'll just have to have Randy fly me there with my feather duster and tickle you pink.  *ww*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Becka So glad you stopped bye, thank you. JM, Now that would be a delight WW Stinky |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sy I alwayz enjoy your writing.... Nice!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Justbleu, Thank you I enjoy your reading me and replies. |
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