Open Poetry #35 |
Looking Back |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Looking Back I would not try to cup the sands Already finely sieved That filtered through ingenuous hands: (A moment lived is lived) To reconstruct a memory That bore perfection’s crown Would be to have a winter tree Redress its crimson gown Exquisite hours benignly stream Through God’s benevolence A perfect moment’s like a dream That happens only once Elizabeth Santos |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are on quite a roll lately...and I'm enjoying it! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzyLady~ 'A perfect moment’s like a dream That happens only once' Oh ... oh ... and this one knows me, upclose and very personally~ Love you dearest~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
How right you are...I would not change even the bad for all has shaped the person I am today...and those treasured moments that seem like dreams become more and more precious as time goes on...Magnificent...*big hugs* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A moment in time never happens twice, and you know what I always say right? |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
WOW...I couldn't have said it better than Startime55, Elizabeth...this was BEAUTIFUL!! Hugs... ~ Becka |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So true.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is ture. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes indeedy and so wisely written and said...loved the way this flowed, with great admiration for your writing this was warm support, thank you Lady poetess for sharing |
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