Open Poetry #35 |
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I Rest |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
I Rest I rest upon a rose’s petal Just above the thorns of nettle A momentary throne of mine And sip the nectar of its wine And in the distance of my view I see a sky of rainbow hew With fields of green that lay in wait Depending on my mental state It is a place of conjured soil Laced with sprays of olive oil Cooked within an ovens rue With something I would rather do And in this dream of fantasy I touch the view of ecstasy Wallow in its time of lease And taste a temporary peace A honey suckle sauerkraut For something you would do without |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Another fine poem My ecstasy is always fantasy Or so it seems Enjoyed your words this snowy morn Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And in the distance of my view I see a sky of rainbow hew With fields of green that lay in wait Depending on my mental state this gave me heart smiles as did the entire poem...Sy, your a magician...and I love reading you....hugs to you and yours and thank you for always sharing such a broad voice of light Hugs Lee J. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wondeful morning read Sy! Very much enjoyed your insight. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your last two lines mornin' Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Enjoyed your words, thank you. LeeJ, Your remarks are always a delight to read, thank you. Nancy, Always enjoy your hugs and tea. ![]() passing, Morning dear, thanks for the sweets |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! What a sweet poem with a clever twist of lemon at the end! ~ "honeysuckle sauerkraut" ~ words that I can honestly tell you, I will never forget! lol Love ya, Sir Sigh Master ( or is that "Thigh Master"?!? EA ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are to cute to root. ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I rest upon a rose’s petal Just above the thorns of nettle A momentary throne of mine And sip the nectar of its wine ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Our resident King of Widsom and Cool Cadence should indeed have a throne! and I the moth, worship your rhymes divine. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I hope you are over your cold. You are in my thoughts. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Now how could I have missed this? You are always a pleasure to read... ~ARh ![]() We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is a place of conjured soil Laced with sprays of olive oil Cooked within an ovens rue With something I would rather do ~*~ I won't rue the day you cook with roux It's something sane that I might do. ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Romantic Heart The pleasure is all mine that you read me. Thank you Sunshine, You are a delight. ![]() |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
finding many pleasurable writes this night~ sorry took so long to find them all~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you my friend. |
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