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Open Poetry #35

And the Shadow Said

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-06-11 12:46 PM

And when you look back
And you will look back
What will you see . . .

The sun sets slowly
In the West
Its one last time

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2005-06-11 02:56 AM

Looking back ....
across the hands of this day
Life in track ....
I see where the lines did stray

coming in
to the crowded emptiness
only then ....
will my shadow lay to rest

looking over my shoulder and taking a moments sigh ....

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-06-12 10:07 AM

Those long, long shadows...
so communicative!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-06-12 12:35 PM

John~
I REALLY like this piece~
*Huglets*:hug:
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

4 posted 2005-06-12 04:58 PM

A beautiful piece of life lesson for a girl on her way to womanhood. Lovely and inspiring...as always, sir.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-23 04:39 PM

to see that I am greater and prettier than you.

beautiful poem about shadow.

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