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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-06-10 04:01 PM


Miond


Miond was shriven when first I saw her in my mind as she fought and scrapped and decided in her world that someone occasionally settled down and in her minds

Miond knew her own mind first but she was always bringing something home whether I wanted it or not

On the doorstep usually where the world meets the unexpected and Miond decides or in Miond's world

Rawand taunt escrim a mater
Missure alog
Escrim mater
Dochen escrim nichted
Ah behya
Rawand taunt escrim a mater
Or nauucht diem
Telied
Nauucht ah him
Gedaffen
Nichted moseer

As Miond saw fire imaged belief of banished impotence joining bonding protecting what was necessary

In memory history knowledge images

Holding a path open of fibres woven to leave the lushness that must destroy as images history had created as power corrupted

Growing blending throwing eons into answering the desire of loosing control as

Lush ideas springing planting seeds that bodies would fight in their dreams to take and their minds to fight

In their dreams

Walking magic physical bounded by other stone white rough hewn stretching as her mind created the entrance she knew brought destruction and her life would be to destroy

In a world she had never sought

Deep as the original words of the first ideas she left put below:

Deep within her light brown eyes of memories earth grass mellowed lushness tempered

As her spirit rang acheons of restrain in her thoughts of light fighting restrain answered

In her upbringing of her magic
In a world entrapped by the chances of glory de-illusioned as in her desires she spoke the desires that would embed her

In herself

Miond the most learned of women with your paws you encapture living
With your scent you know the world
With your words the world unfurls
What words could you write
Without those paws and teeth
In the night

Who would ride upon your back
In the safety they fear they lack
Alas old friend
and I lack age

Whilst you remembered as a sage
And grow younger day by day
With wisdom attending
Your every stay
Of a deeper loss
Until one day
You my friend
And I will stray

And one day never more

To a day

Flowing known yet unknown simple but not
In thought

Power but unusable yet unable to achieve
Without power

Salvation and peace in sanctuary
That others fear

In ignorance

In power of others
Comes feeling

To feel at home

To watch small games
And smile
And roll
And laugh

For to have power to destroy is limited to what you can see and all you can see is misted

And all you can destroy is what matters

For what else would you destroy



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-06-11 09:13 AM


Nice to read you again, Dave!
Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-06-11 09:25 AM


Yes Dave...good to read your work again!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

DavePage
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3 posted 2005-06-11 03:31 PM


Sorry that isn't going to happen, no matter how I would like to

I need to concentrate on other things because that is what I need to do

I finished off Mioned which will become a book at some point at time, years away

My decision to stop stays the same

regards

Dave

Margherita
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4 posted 2005-06-11 04:31 PM


quote:
Deep within her light brown eyes of memories earth grass mellowed lushness tempered

As her spirit rang acheons of restrain in her thoughts of light fighting restrain answered


In this profound write you have expressed some really exceptional thoughts very beautifully, dear Dave!

I appreciate your creations and your presence.

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2005-06-11 04:42 PM



Good luck with your book! Be well!


EA

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6 posted 2005-06-13 09:08 PM


really nice to read you again.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

froggy
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7 posted 2005-06-13 11:14 PM


Hey Dave,
  Enjoyed this very much.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Ericc
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8 posted 2005-06-15 01:01 PM


Thanks Dave...for once more.

Eric

LeeJ
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9 posted 2005-06-15 01:31 PM


hiya Dave
so good to see you and read you again, this was awesome!

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2005-06-16 09:21 PM


Enjoyed...James
Martie
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11 posted 2005-06-16 09:30 PM


I'm so glad you finished Mioned....I understand it's importance.  My best to you!
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