Open Poetry #35 |
I said I'd finished words - Mioned I will finishe |
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Miond Miond was shriven when first I saw her in my mind as she fought and scrapped and decided in her world that someone occasionally settled down and in her minds Miond knew her own mind first but she was always bringing something home whether I wanted it or not On the doorstep usually where the world meets the unexpected and Miond decides or in Miond's world Rawand taunt escrim a mater Missure alog Escrim mater Dochen escrim nichted Ah behya Rawand taunt escrim a mater Or nauucht diem Telied Nauucht ah him Gedaffen Nichted moseer As Miond saw fire imaged belief of banished impotence joining bonding protecting what was necessary In memory history knowledge images Holding a path open of fibres woven to leave the lushness that must destroy as images history had created as power corrupted Growing blending throwing eons into answering the desire of loosing control as Lush ideas springing planting seeds that bodies would fight in their dreams to take and their minds to fight In their dreams Walking magic physical bounded by other stone white rough hewn stretching as her mind created the entrance she knew brought destruction and her life would be to destroy In a world she had never sought Deep as the original words of the first ideas she left put below: Deep within her light brown eyes of memories earth grass mellowed lushness tempered As her spirit rang acheons of restrain in her thoughts of light fighting restrain answered In her upbringing of her magic In a world entrapped by the chances of glory de-illusioned as in her desires she spoke the desires that would embed her In herself Miond the most learned of women with your paws you encapture living With your scent you know the world With your words the world unfurls What words could you write Without those paws and teeth In the night Who would ride upon your back In the safety they fear they lack Alas old friend and I lack age Whilst you remembered as a sage And grow younger day by day With wisdom attending Your every stay Of a deeper loss Until one day You my friend And I will stray And one day never more To a day Flowing known yet unknown simple but not In thought Power but unusable yet unable to achieve Without power Salvation and peace in sanctuary That others fear In ignorance In power of others Comes feeling To feel at home To watch small games And smile And roll And laugh For to have power to destroy is limited to what you can see and all you can see is misted And all you can destroy is what matters For what else would you destroy |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nice to read you again, Dave! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Dave...good to read your work again! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sorry that isn't going to happen, no matter how I would like to I need to concentrate on other things because that is what I need to do I finished off Mioned which will become a book at some point at time, years away My decision to stop stays the same regards Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: In this profound write you have expressed some really exceptional thoughts very beautifully, dear Dave! I appreciate your creations and your presence. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good luck with your book! Be well! EA |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
really nice to read you again. My spirit will rise |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Dave, Enjoyed this very much. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Thanks Dave...for once more. Eric |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hiya Dave so good to see you and read you again, this was awesome! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm so glad you finished Mioned....I understand it's importance. My best to you! |
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