not titled, just late night ramblings

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Open Poetry #35

not titled, just late night ramblings

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2005-02-24 02:11 AM

warrent your laughter silently to the edge
of the last place you became you, noting
of course the various failings in
your stance, and so how to begin?
perhaps a slight upward tilt of
one corner of the mouth, nothing so
brash as to stir any real emotion,
just a sort of excuse to make it look good.
but hold, for you are coming close
to danger and the effect it may have
upon your mind, to feel an outburst,
a giggle, a mind blowing snort.
for to let loose of it, you may have
to proove that you are human, and not
the senseless posturing imp that most
know you for, and love you all the same.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-02-24 02:20 AM

You are one very observant man who appears enamored with a lovable imp! Enjoyed your "late night ramblings".

Love & Light,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-24-2005 02:59 AM).]

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2005-02-24 07:35 AM

"Ramble On".....

~Enjoyed your ramblings

~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-02-24 08:40 AM

wise thoughts to ponder, and yet, people will be people, and unless they want to change themselves, there is nothing we can do, but concentrate on compassion and being there for them if need be...

This was indeed a soft care on your part, penned exceptionally well, for a late night rant...God bless you and yours

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-24 09:03 AM

neat write

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2005-06-25 03:03 AM

I am glad I was here to read this. Man, if I could just write like you for one day....how you write always leaves me thinking, did I get it like he ment it? Your poetry is that of a "true poet"
As Always
Jenn E

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-06-25 07:21 AM

to prove that you are human, and not
the senseless posturing imp that most
know you for, and love you all the same.

~*~

I've missed you! Welcome home!

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