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WindWalker
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0 posted 2005-06-10 02:33 AM


It seems quite obvious
hardships, pain and suffering
are for most the norm.
It seems equally true
that most who live in rich nations
are quite blinded to this fact –
unless the fact can sell commercial time
and it is splashed on the TV
or headlined in the newspaper –

Ignoring the plight of millions
cannot be so easy, can it?
Apparently, it can.
Just call it “cognitive dissonance.”
Call it lack of empathy.
Call it lack of compassion.
But really, it’s lack of awareness.

I met a fellow-traveller
who had seen many parts of this world,
– not the touristy-type places
   splashed as bill-boards on ocean-fronts –  
but places where everyday is a struggle
and each struggle, an adventure.

He claimed the people he met
in those skeletal places
changed his outlook on life.
It was there he saw compassion come alive
for the very first time.
It was there people showed him life
is neither about money nor possessions,
nor about finding happiness.

It was there he heard laughter as from a child –
free and sincere.
There he tasted food fully appreciated
and there he found
he could give thanks for life
for each day there is a miracle –
not of survival as many believe
but of joyful acceptance.

© Copyright 2005 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-06-10 02:40 AM


we all should be so fortunate to be able to experience that
Startime55
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2 posted 2005-06-10 12:23 PM


A lesson is here that many of us need to learn...The almighty dollar does not bring happiness...As I get older and spend time with my grandchildren I finally learn that their love and laughter is what is priceless in this world...Wonderful writing, dear friend, your message opens our eyes and hearts...*big hugs* to you today...

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-06-10 07:48 PM


Enjoyed...James
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2005-06-10 09:19 PM


Now you're talking my language!
Excellent write WW.
TD

miscellanea
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5 posted 2005-06-10 09:36 PM


enjoyed this very much!!!

              miscellanea

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2005-06-11 03:50 AM


Indeed a good message in this write, WW.  Enjoyed from my standpoint of knowing that all you say is true.
ice
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since 2003-05-17
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7 posted 2005-06-11 05:48 AM


Wind

"joyful acceptance"
To me is the key statement of this poem.

Sandburg found this one day as he walked along the Desplaines...The poem is titled "Happiness", but I believe it should be called "joyful acceptance"

"And I saw a crowd of Hungarians under the trees with their women and children and a keg of beer and an accordion."

This poem makes a profound statement, makes the reader self examine, I enjoyed reading it....

-----------ice
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