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Open Poetry #35

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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2005-06-09 11:32 AM

This is my first attempt at writing after a LONG break from it. Can't really think of a title to it. if you have any ideas, please let me know

sorrowful symphony
echos in his hollow heart.
becoming blissfully numb
in the wake of regrets,
countless in its intensity
unbound and unmatched.
cries out in the night,
tears raining down
upon a shattered landscape
that was once his soul.
gentle memories,
held for mere moments
before crashing against
the harsh realities
of the hell of his design.
joy fading in his grasp
and love all but spent,
hope hanging by a thread
and faith, falling into the abyss.
only darkness falls into the night
lying there a truly broken soul
with no sign of a happy ending

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-06-09 12:17 PM

this is such a sad write!
I would title it,
'Darkness crashing'...
just a thought though

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-06-09 12:20 PM

Filled with such pain that cries from the "hollow heart"....powerful heartfelt writing...

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