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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-02-23 11:30 PM



Four
wintered trees
beside the frozen shore

still
as posed
in common awe

As if
the cold
were king of all,

no leaves
to mummer

other moods


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-02-24 06:42 AM



Now you've gone
and caught the mood.

Perfect!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2005-02-24 06:50 AM


yes, indeed...perfect...

and here, it's the quiet before the storm...
Well done

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Louisiana
3 posted 2005-02-24 11:04 AM


And with a storm outside... I could use those leaves. *S* Beautiful work!
Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-05-01 02:39 PM


those were the four ducks swimming in the pond later.
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