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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Stars sipping colors through the straws of the tree umbrellas, rainbows and butterflies recycle lost dreams |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh wow! love this inky! this style looks so good on you (of course, what doesn't?) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
vivid images through your eyes to pages of blue Michelle... bringing life into full view and bloom. lovin it! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..I like the images..and the idea... and how they fit with the title.. letting us get lost in the moment as well.. nicely done... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Michele.. Much enjoyed the imagery. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Michele, this is very beautiful and and the three words above are simply fantastic! Love, Margherita  |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Very nice |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks a bunch |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InkyOne~ LOVELY imagery here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Stars sipping colors through the straws of the tree umbrellas," ~ words written from a true goddess... and what would we ever do without those butterflies and rainbows?!? Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You know, I think you see each moment in living color Michelle. Inspiring write. TD |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a picture this paints! Wonderful choice of words. Rae |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for this moment |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and this is what I love about you, Michele. The simplest words bring forth such a bang! it's beautiful! |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Very nice! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Michelle Sometimes nature shows how connected our spirits are to it.. "rainbows and butterflies recycle lost dreams" A simple sounding statement when first read, but the surface of those words hide something very deep. Wordsworth felt this, I feel it, apparently, so do you. "I have felt A presence that disturbs me with the joy Of elevated thoughts; a sense sublime Of something far more deeply interfused, Whose dwelling is the light of setting suns, And the round ocean and the living air, And the blue sky, and in the mind of man.." ("Tintern Abby") One tiny thought, Inky..Perhaps you could eliminate "the" in this line... " of the tree umbrellas" Of course that is the opinion of one who has added many words that might have been left out of his own poetry....just a thought.. Well done, and well enjoyed ----------ice/ford ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I believe, nature is who we are, and therein lies many secrets of knowledge,,,and you have transformed an understanding of gathering...simply stunning write |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
peaceful and heavenly  mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for seeing this too |
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