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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-06-08 12:24 PM



Her Fulltime Man

Thinking about her
tenderly.

Thinking about her,
how much she means
to me.

While I think of her
my world seems so
much nicer.

If she wanted me to be
her full time man
I would let her.

JamesLee
June08
2005

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ctowen
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1 posted 2005-06-08 03:32 AM


Sounds like you all ready are .....
            ... she is fully within you .....

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-06-09 12:15 PM


Thank you ctowan for the nice response...
I decided a long time ago...I'm giving her an opportunity to catch up...James

WindWalker
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3 posted 2005-06-10 02:31 AM


This was very nice! Good writing!
Cloud 9
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4 posted 2005-06-10 11:29 AM


I like this!!!

Sami

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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5 posted 2005-06-10 12:55 PM


This is so warm, I feel like I've been hugged by a poem.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-06-10 07:22 PM


Thank you wind walker, Cloud 9 and Pilgrimage for the kind responses...James
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