Open Poetry #35 |
unsettled like me |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I am beyond tired and weary has long since past me by. Total exhaustion is clearly within sight but it never quite seems to get here; my strength has waned in this lopsided fight. So I gather what is left of me to great heights and say there shall be no more of this scant sifting of yesterdays over your remains; I will unleash sanity; let loose my scream, spin and spin until my missing you and I crack open the foundations and knock the sense out of this day by day life. Until time surrenders its tick tocking I want the whole world to be unsettled like me. [This message has been edited by jellybeans (06-07-2005 02:38 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
we are listening to the same clock today m'friend.... sigh.... big ole hugs comin at ya dear one.... I really want to care, |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah lady, whew...I wish...oh how I wish...but it still keeps ticking...sometimes its better to not write than it is to do so... I love your signature...I think mine is busted too |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words reach out to the soul bringing with their cry understanding...*hugs* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you startime for your kind replies you are a soul filled with love |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Until time surrenders its tick tocking I want the whole world to be unsettled like me." This so sums up a quiet rage... I think I understand, jb. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such rages... are written best.... just like this my friend... with a bit of cold heat..and determination.. hugs ma'am.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All that has happened, all that shall be... circles you in golden light. Your son... he is still smiling on his mother of love... and cries with you that you need to know peace. He loves you... and wants you to sleep tonight. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hugs and loving thoughts are on the wing to you today I do know how you feel |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Excellent.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I will unleash sanity; let loose my scream, spin and spin until my missing you and I crack open the foundations and knock the sense out of this day by day life. Oh, lady... I feel as though I've stepped into a tornado of turmoil... you wrote this perfectly! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh gosh, I wanted to thank each on of you personally but I am so swamped, that just to get one reply, I am standing with one foot out the door...sigh... thank you...you all know just what you mean to me...thank you |
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