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jellybeans
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0 posted 2005-06-07 01:50 PM


I am beyond tired and weary
has long since past me by.
Total exhaustion is clearly within sight
but it never quite seems to get here;
my strength has waned in this
lopsided fight.

So I gather what is left of me
to great heights and say
there shall be no more
of this scant sifting
of yesterdays over your remains;
I will unleash sanity;
let loose my scream,  
spin and spin until
my missing you and I
crack open the foundations
and knock the sense out of this
day by day life.

Until time surrenders its tick tocking
I want the whole world to be
unsettled
     like
  me.


[This message has been edited by jellybeans (06-07-2005 02:38 PM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-06-07 01:54 PM


we are listening to the same clock today m'friend....
sigh....
big ole hugs comin at ya dear one....

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

jellybeans
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2 posted 2005-06-07 02:03 PM


ah lady, whew...I wish...oh how I wish...but it still keeps ticking...sometimes its better to not write than it is to do so...
I love your signature...I think mine is busted too

Startime55
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3 posted 2005-06-07 02:04 PM


Your words reach out to the soul bringing with their cry understanding...*hugs*

jellybeans
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4 posted 2005-06-07 02:39 PM


thank you startime for your kind replies
you are a soul filled with love

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2005-06-07 03:44 PM


"Until time surrenders its tick tocking
I want the whole world to be
unsettled
     like
  me."

This so sums up a quiet rage...

I think I understand, jb.

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2005-06-07 04:36 PM


such rages... are written best.... just like this my friend...

with a bit of cold heat..and determination..

hugs ma'am....

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-06-07 09:35 PM


All that has happened,
all that shall be...

circles you
in golden light.

Your son...
he is still smiling
on his mother of love...

and cries
with you that you
need to know peace.

He loves you...
and wants you to sleep
tonight.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2005-06-08 08:23 AM


hugs and loving thoughts are on the wing to you today

I do know how you feel

Cloud 9
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9 posted 2005-06-08 12:50 PM


Excellent..


suthern
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10 posted 2005-06-08 02:30 PM


I will unleash sanity;
let loose my scream,  
spin and spin until
my missing you and I
crack open the foundations
and knock the sense out of this
day by day life.

Oh, lady... I feel as though I've stepped into a tornado of turmoil... you wrote this perfectly!

jellybeans
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Posts 2298

11 posted 2005-06-10 02:43 PM


oh gosh, I wanted to thank each on of you personally but I am so swamped, that just to get one reply, I am standing with one foot out the door...sigh...
thank you...you all know just what you mean to me...thank you

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