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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-06-07 12:19 PM



Calm After The Storm

Here upon a winter day
The storm is moving in
I heard a fued in the sky
Where both want to win

Thunder and lightening
Both start there attack
Grey clouds are drifting
The sky is almost black

Thunder began roaring
With loud furious scorn
Shredded by lightening
Black clouds were torn

The storm clouds open
As down came the rain
Thunder lowly mumbles
Silver streaked disdain

Last streak of lightening
Flashed across the sky
Then the fued was over
Thunder roars goodbye

The calm after the storm
Rainbow above to view
Bright blue sky returned
The sun peeking through


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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-06-07 12:26 PM



Your writing was so descriptive that I could almost smell the ozone in the air!

A stirring ~ and then calming ~ piece of poetry!

Love & Sky Light,
Linda
Rainbow

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2005-06-07 12:30 PM


Thanks ever so much for your reply ....yes we have had a couple of  storms the past week here and the thunder and lightening always seem to be having a raging battle , but wonderful to see the rainbow afterwards

Hope


Startime55
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3 posted 2005-06-07 02:16 PM


How wonderful...I love the trip through the storm and the vision it brought to life...Thanks for share this beauty...*hugs*

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-06-09 04:45 AM


nice one!
LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-06-09 07:42 AM


Hope, you are precious, as are your writes...


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