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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2005-06-06 11:20 AM



a candle’s flame
coruscates in your eyes -
searing my lips

CG

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-06-06 11:43 AM


WOW!!! ... just wow!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2005-06-06 05:15 PM


... and a flare of delight it IS!

And I learned the meaning of a new word! Never heard "coruscate".

Thank you.

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-06-06 05:28 PM


nice one
CastleGuard
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4 posted 2005-06-06 07:05 PM


..and thank YOU, for the kind words...

CG

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2005-06-09 01:20 AM


Lipbalm is all I can say~

nice words~

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

CastleGuard
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6 posted 2005-06-09 10:28 AM



Thank you, ARH.

Though, lipbalm - such a superficial protection...

CG

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