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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-06-06 04:08 AM


Night shattered to
dust, dark particles
inhaled, casting stygian
shadows within us.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (06-06-2005 07:06 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-06-06 05:13 AM


nice

check the tyoo though

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2005-06-06 05:46 AM


The night is always dark....but you can see the dust floating through the light....

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-06-06 08:49 AM


So mote it be!

~ Sorry, I couldn't resist!

You certainly can create a dark mood with an economical use of words!

May starlight stud your nights! Stars


EA

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