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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2005-06-05 06:08 PM


I wrote a poem, profound, the other day.
so subtlely attuned to deafened ears.
I tried to find this paper that I wrote
when, big surprise, I could not find it here!

I wrote another poem to take its' place,
encompassing the world and all its' cares.
You guessed it, when, I turned to look,
there was no single shred of it left there.

I tried another poem, but, woe is me.
All seems to have been lost and, here we are.
You've nothing better than to do but, see
another reading of these words and, are

you experienced my friend, it's worth a look,
inside this idiots' notebook?

© Copyright 2005 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04
Posts 501
aloft
1 posted 2005-06-05 06:50 PM


All the missing ones were profound
my lesser ones are here wire bound
so I will search again tomorrow
for perfect words that I might borrow

yv
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 574

2 posted 2005-06-05 06:53 PM


Nice.  I have the same problem sometimes...I write what I think is something profound and if I look up for one second from my masterpiece, it's no longer there.  I suppose we are all writing in the "idiots' notebook."

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2005-06-05 06:59 PM


idiot's notebook?

frown

don't talk about my buddy that way!



Now? Can I read your diary? *chuckle*

I want it ALL, Doc!

more more more

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
4 posted 2005-06-08 09:56 PM


Ok, people,
way too much glamour clamor. I know I'm pretty much irresistable, but, puh-leeze!
Seriously, THANKS!.
Doc

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