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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-06-05 01:24 PM

Gently, winds caress in a wandering
walk...or, was that my lips touching
yours?

Lingering, the shift of a curtains fall,
holding close the sill as a stream of
brilliance rises from the floor.

Will you remain, will you grace my
soul as I sleep in restlessness?
Can my whisper lightly touch an
ear? Can I, can we....

The waltz, drifting across a still
pond, rippling the night air...
Wanting to absorb the pomp as
pageantry ploys...and perfection
pauses...passionately.

You know, yes...this I know and
as each sun rises before the morning
moon...I wake to the dampness of
one lingering, delicately given,
pause of a kiss....and I smile...
Before a dream trembles the
reed of water’s edge...once
more.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-06-05 02:01 PM

Sigh, dear Barry, you don't know how widely the ripples caused by the beauty of your words expanded within my heart.

It's delicate, yet passionately romantic in the same moment.

Love it!

Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-06-05 02:33 PM

Magnus~
You employ poetic softness so very, very effectively~
I 'felt' that morning kiss~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-06-05 02:40 PM

Barry, I could read your love poems all day long! ~ and then dream of them all night long!

Thank you again for gently blowing some of your magnolia charm up this way!

Linda

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2005-06-05 04:39 PM

An exceptional sensitivity breezed this write. Charming.
TD

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

5 posted 2005-06-05 05:09 PM

How heavenly. Sorry, no criticism here. It was lovely...and truly romantic. You hold the kiss of a lover in your hand, my friend. I loved this poem.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2005-06-05 06:04 PM

Barry....

this is so soft and written with much heart....good to see ya Sir..

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

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