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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Gently, winds caress in a wandering walk...or, was that my lips touching yours? Lingering, the shift of a curtains fall, holding close the sill as a stream of brilliance rises from the floor. Will you remain, will you grace my soul as I sleep in restlessness? Can my whisper lightly touch an ear? Can I, can we.... The waltz, drifting across a still pond, rippling the night air... Wanting to absorb the pomp as pageantry ploys...and perfection pauses...passionately. You know, yes...this I know and as each sun rises before the morning moon...I wake to the dampness of one lingering, delicately given, pause of a kiss....and I smile... Before a dream trembles the reed of water’s edge...once more. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh, dear Barry, you don't know how widely the ripples caused by the beauty of your words expanded within my heart. It's delicate, yet passionately romantic in the same moment. Love it! Love, Margherita  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ You employ poetic softness so very, very effectively~ I 'felt' that morning kiss~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, I could read your love poems all day long! ~ and then dream of them all night long! Thank you again for gently blowing some of your magnolia charm up this way! Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An exceptional sensitivity breezed this write. Charming. TD |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
How heavenly. Sorry, no criticism here. It was lovely...and truly romantic. You hold the kiss of a lover in your hand, my friend. I loved this poem. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry.... this is so soft and written with much heart....good to see ya Sir.. I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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