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Giving up a chance
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Giving up a chance |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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I really feel so stupid Why did I do that? Handing over my happiness On a silver plate I might be over-hopeful Imagining the outcome But still I agonise over My giving up the trump I know I am a loser Wrong in every sense How could I compete with her? She is my good friend Putting things in perspective It all seems so right Then why do I feel a dull ache My heart is pulling tight Maybe I should go to bed Tomorrow will be fine I could look for help somewhere Seeking words of divine _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No, you weren't "stupid" ~ perhaps over-generous, but there is no crime in that! ~ and you most definitely are not a "loser"! It sounds as thought you are going through a difficult time right now. May the sun come out for you tomorrow! Loving, comforting hug, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tomorrow it will be your time to receive...James |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
guy trouble? doing the right thing doesn't mean that it won't be an emotional toll. guess that's why moral dilemmas are so difficult. anyway, you can't label yourself a loser even if you chose to err. we all have a right to attain our own happiness. sounds competitive but if you choose to fight, you are giving the guy vital information to make a well-informed decision easier said than done though. hee sayang sayang, the days will get better  quote: i adored these lines |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Mon Chérie, this hurts, but it was right to give your heart the chance if there was a sort of "competition". You have rendered your sentiments beautifully, you touched me. But never ever think that you are a loser. Such a thing does not exist. Even those who might appear to be exclusively winners, sometimes lose. It's life. We learn. And it's a good thing to sleep over it. Love and light. Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure do understand this hugs to you |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
It seems that you do have to offer it if you really mean to give it away and you have take the risk of getting burned. Hope the pain eases soon. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thank you all for your kind words. Will hold your advice close to heart... and move on from there. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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